Sunday, October 11, 2009

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mobile

ghorir knata tik tik kore kokhon
akghor akghor kore egie jae
janalar vari pordatar fnak die
koekfali streetlighter alo eshe pore bichhanae..

tar chokhduto amar opor cheye thake
nishpooke, obiram-
jani ami kisher opekkhae!

jani ami oi chokhduto besh koekdin dhore
shei ak i opekkha kore choleche

jani ami erpori she amae buke japte dhore venge porbe
ak nishshobdo kannae
jani ami kisher opekkhae!

jeneo amae niruttap thakte hoy;
nihshobdo,niruttap, nistej,-
jhorer thik ager noisshobder moto

chokhduto abar dhire dhire jhapsha hoe ashe
karon she jane tar ei opekkha okaron-
r tar hater mutho shokto hoe ashe amar opor
ami tar nishchup mobile phone.

4 comments:

  1. eta shudhu amake nie lekha noy...akta general feeling k ektu unique vabe futie tolar cheshta korechi

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  2. nirob jodi arti sukher
    athoba sudhui nirob chokher jol,
    obak jodi sondhyatara
    sob e jeneo nischup abichol.

    durovash tobu hater choyay
    baki sobai mukhosh pore sohanuvutir chol!
    sobai thake sakhkhi seje
    keu bolena - palie jabi, chol.

    bajuk na aaj chutir banshi sab nirobota muche
    koruk na vir charipashe chena sobder dol.
    na hoy aaj ke sudhui sunbo ami
    aaj amar angul chue pran khule tui bol.

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  3. waiting 4 d phone 2 ring???nice by d way...

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